Nobody said anything
Laughter and cheers
He must have had a nightmare
He say he saw the bestie
But there isn't a bestie
The Snake-thing
But there isn't a snake
Shut up! wait! listen!
Has anyone got any matches
Not for the two of us
What do you mean
We haven't made a fire
That was no good
We used his specs
Fire on the mountain
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Steven Ruan and Claude Hu
The images in my head this poem creates is really vivid.
ReplyDeletesome feedback to consider for your next found poem:
ReplyDelete-check the rubric/checklist; missing Original Title; Subtitle with page references, author and the fact that it's a found poem. No computer-generated images were allowed (or copied, clipped, internet saved pics) Everything had to be made by you and created by you.
Audio/Visual: You should have narrated the poem instead of merely having it scroll. There was silence and you could have read the poem aloud
The poem and arrangement of the lines was effective. Do look closely at the criteria sheet for the next assignment so you don't miss elements.